Oculama

SNOT DAMN! This is probably my favourite intro comic coming out of Kudra. You get a hell of a lot out of 3 pages which is very very very nice. You tell a compelling story and set up the Everyman perfectly, I already have ideas for this matchup based on this comic alone. My advice going forward, and this will take some extra time and it's not entirely necessary but I think it would be really cool and you already show that you can do it. But in the first panel you have that multi coloured sky with the coloured lines. I would love to see that throughout the comic. Finding spaces where you can get a multicoloured pattern and going all in on it, like the ocean, or banners of the politician. I think it could be really cool and you'd have one hell of a unique artstyle which'll get some extra points. Great job on this, excited for Kudra Good luck!

This is such a cool character and concept for Kudra! I really like the direction your starting with for the tourney.
I thought the writing and prose was very nice, you got me hooked in wanting to know how this will go!

The paneling in pacing was very good, and everything was delivered clearly.
Any critiques I have at this point would be pretty nitpicky.

Overall well done! I am excited to see what you do in kudra!

This was a fun comic, I loved the way you showed Everyman's descent, and Kudra's stylization was sick as well! I find it interesting that his whole shtick is that he's trying to be a devoted follower of the beast. That's cool as hell to see! I've always enjoyed zealots in storylines with Kaiju, because they truly do have a good reason to worship the thing - it's massive, it's unknowable, and most of the time, the kaiju not killing them is their sign their devotion is real, that the kaiju is sparing them. I cannot wait to see your SOK comic!

Great to see you jumping back on the saddle and on a death tournament no less! Also great to see what you can do on your own!

I think what I would have liked to see most in this comic was the actual tragedy that shaped Everyman into what he is, not just the allusion to it, that feels important in shaping our vision of him as well, to get a taste of his point of view. If this was something you were intending to save for a future comic I definitely recommend showing it sooner than later. It's one of Everyman's most compelling ideas, what makes a man go mad, the feeling of cosmic bliss when encountering something so indescribably massive and powerful up close, I think you'll really want to dive into these emotions going forward!
Additionally, a note for lettering/text, the mind tends to see text size in comics as a way of determining how *loud* it is, so the varying text sizes you have in this comic, if you are not intending them to be sometimes shouted or any variance of volume, then stick with uniform sizing and if you want to emphasize words or phrases you can do a combination of bolding them or separating them into their own word balloons/paragraphs.