Oculama

AAAH finally! Wow, you really utilized the the scrolling format really well. I felt like I was falling with Indy! The 'CLNK!' in page two, I heard that in my head and I thought putting the grappling mechanism in the foreground was a clever way of emphasizing the break from his fall. I wish it looked more finished though but I do understand that life gets busy sometimes and what you delivered is well done as it is! Readability did not suffer both in text and art. I can't wait to see Indy in action and join in the hijinks. He seems to have a really fun personality and sense of humor. I want to see more!

Enter the Indy bot! I love how you utilized the webtoons format to help you sell this fall into the Null? Space? Nothingness? I also like that it wasn't straight black. You got some tasty textures placed on there! I also like that the content inked in white feels a bit rough and scrawled in- like Indy is still just an idea, or something rough and in progress in such a void. Not sure if that was your intent, but I dig the effect.

I think if I had a crit, it would be that your maps and diagrams on page one could've done with more refining. I'd get if they were super far away, but these macro shots of all these papers highlight the haphazard scrawl that I think would've benefitted more if you'd gone into detail. Maybe even tossed some hints to future treasure in future battles?

All in all though, I'm intrigued to see where our bionic buddy's landed. Looking forward to more!

Oh man, I wonder what happened to Indy to get him into this spot? I like the use of Inversion with the black and white and the falling leading up to the bright white impact. Also a fan of the texture you used in the void space .I think it helps make the stark white line art pop out more vs just black and a lot more interesting to look at. The swinging transition is clever too, enjoyed that.

I'm very much looking forward to see how and why Indy got here, and what he will find out in his time in junction.