Oculama

This redesigned look is very excellent. This feels like you're setting up for a fun return when The White Diamond happens later this year, which would be excellent to see. On the whole, this was rather fun. The new design, fate, development of Mingo is very interesting. The story was a surprise and there is a lot there to have hyped up. The color choices were very well selected and this felt like a much better stretch of your muscles doing that. It's a bit of a fine line with intentional and rushed with the line-work you're doing. However, what would probably help sell it more is spending a little more time developing your forms and figures on your human characters. If you can take some time to practice and tackle that, it will definitely pay dividends.This was a nice comic to see from you! Hope to see more of Mingo in the future! Nice work!

A fun comic, nice to see you doing more supernatural deals and the like. It definitely feels like it's part of a complete whole with what Pizza Man's comic had happening in it, which was a lovely twist of fate. Artistically speaking, while your inks and character work with Mingo looked like an improvement from your previous outings, the black/grey shadows feel a bit too plain. Especially when paired with all of the orange colors which produces more of an unappealing brown tone. Have you considered playing with more backlights in your shading? It might help give better definition, perhaps make the entire thing pop more. Furthermore, don't be afraid to play with your colors more daringly! Maybe a comic with limited colors could be a fun challenge for yourself! All that being said, always a pleasure seeing you come out and participate and hope to see more of you soon! Good work!

wow! bug head mingo was cool. obviously being dead turned out good for him, lol. your colors were super cool man, i really liked the colors you did but it ended so soon! it felt like were here and then we left, i wished we had received a little more. its wild you worked on this during the vine noon tournament. i know mingo is dead but if this is the last comic hes in, its pretty cool!

first time reading a comic with labu and he is mean! loved that bait and switch ending where mingo got screwed over. it felt like a really unique ending for someone who has already died. that panel with all of the devils hanging around and the laughing face were real highlights of this comic. you should be proud of what you did! hopefully we can fight one day if/when i get someone else in! until then, keep them dead folks underground!