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Haha, ending this chilling at the bus stop was a great cherry on top of a fantastic introductory comic. We don't get these very often, but they make such a good impression on who your character is and what to expect- this comic offers that up in spades. A solid reason for shambling out of the grave, and intriguing peek into some dubious backstory and your own super creative take on the white diamond itself, which is always fun to see.
Technically, your angular style really adds to Caz's edgy little character- which doesn't exempt them from being delightfully goofy- I especially loved the sand pouring out of the goggles.
Caz looks awesome, and I am definitely eager to see what they pull out for the White Diamond
oooh what a delightful intro comic! Really good looking work you did here. Panel layout and pacing was really nice, and the way your colored the comic was nicely done and very good use of spot blacks. Caz seems like a really fun character with a lot of personality!
My only main feedback, as while this comic tells us how she got here, I think a little more information on who she is, what she is about, and what happened to her to get her to this point would be beneficial in an introduction comic, to give us a real sense of who we are dealing with.
Otherwise, really good lookin' comic and a good start to get the ball rolling for white diamond. I am very excited to read more from you and see what Caz can do!
Oculama doesn't get too many intro comics. The pipeline of character made to tournament entered is very fast. So, seeing someone make an intro comic for their character is always a treat and this one does not disappoint. Caz seems like a ton of fun and already the audience is given a good sense of her character and what she's about. Referencing events and tournaments that happened off-site isn't a problem in itself, but its going to be more difficult to follow for those in the audience that don't know these tournaments and what happened prior, so you may have your work cut out for you going forward. However, with this kind of quality and storytelling behind you, it'll be really interesting to see what you end up doing with Caz "Fucking" Turner when she hops into the White Diamond. Excellent introduction comic. Well done!