Oculama

This was a really fun comic! I really really appreciated the Charlie cameo at the beginning; Plus there were a lot of other really enjoyable cameos too! The comic overall used some really interesting and creative paneling, especially pages 6-8. The strongest point would honestly have to be towards the end as they fight. The background of Page 9 was absolutely *gorgeous*. Your strongest suit so far continues to be that you're really really good at drawing special energy effects and fight scenes, they're very colorful and vividly detailed! The only real points of criticism I can fish for is that the anatomy can occasionally be a bit inconsistent, and the dialogue bubbles, while perfectly passable, could maybe be capitalized to be a bit more eyepopping and creative. But otherwise, this has been a fantastic comic!

What an absolutely ambitious 13 pages for the summer collab. =00 So sorry you missed the deadline but big kudos that you took it upon yourself to submit for our eyeballs to get our peep on anyway. I think I noticed a bit of photo bashing in your background/environment elements, which is great to see :D I'd love to see you continue to experiment with that method as that establishing shot of the tiki bar is pretty neat. Your take and design on a des constructed Did was fun- talk about scary! Also your coloring on that sunset was stunning. Such unexpected but almost celestial colors. Speaking of a sunset moment, the dead contacting the living for one last battle and heartstring pulling conversation wasn't what I would've figured for a summer collab, but as the summer season wraps up, feels like an apt goodbye to fun in the sun.

I am so glad you still submitted a comic to tie into the summer holiday collab! This felt like you had a really fun time working on this comic,especially with the all out coloring! It looked like you also tried experimenting with some new techniques in this one, so it was fun seeing you try those out!
It was neat seeing how you weaved in the other characters and showed connections between them. I also thought all the different shenanigans they got up to were fun!

Fun action/fight scenes as always as well!
Thank you for submitting and letting us read it!