Oculama

Myeth..wow this is professional work the art, the pacing, the angles you used! Absolute inspiration for me. The noir feel is very evident and I tend to kind of get that from Clyde comics now (must be the outfit lol). If I were to nitpick, it could probably use more spot blacks in some of the pages like what you did on page 13! Again, I think that's more of a time constraint thing for you than an oversight if i were to being honest lol. The comic is excellent overall. I really can't crit it without being nitpicky. XD

I love how you still incorporated that running joke with Clyde holding the (too tiny for him) calling card. And that twist at the end with Bug Killer. WOWZA. I am closely following this arc (always have haha but I just get more invested the more I read about it). It's really something that feels like it's meant to be published. Amazing job!

Myeth this was a fantastic read from start to finish. I was really impressed with your pacing and your paneling. You did some really creative paneling in this, everything flowed really nice and there wasn't an awkward transition in the bunch. I also enjoyed how you used your screen tones and hatching to really elevate the gritty feel, with just a touch of color to highlight certain story aspects. At this time I can't think of anything constructive to add or improve, it was overall really good read and Im excited to see what bug killer gets up to now in their new life.

Gorgeous inks. Really even without colors or shading this stands well on its own as a polished work! :D I love those spotblacks and angles especially. I dig how the textures like your textures and crosshatching add some tooth and detailing that grayscale would otherwise do but to better effect. The introduction of that singular color to add to your opponents theming let me know exactly who they were and was a nice doff of the hat to them.
Gosh, just from the start, that overhead shot on page one has gotta be great angle to open things up. Your attention to backgrounds makes me so happy. Mainly because it not just four walls and a ceiling. You add so much lived in personality to the environment. You have successfully married a giant bug in a noir genre comic and it isn't silly or hokey at all. It's played straight when it needs to, and plays with humor to ease the pressure and tension you put the reader through. Whatta ride! :D

This is such a fantastic improvement from when we saw your previous comics. I really loved the plot and the potential for future pairing up with Clyde. The idea of the two of them hanging out together is a super fun outcome. I'm loving that it seems like in the Bug Underworld, she's become this kind of mythic legend. You really embody a fascinating idea of how diverse all of those in these bug worlds can be and how very different the "courts" can end up being. It's a super interesting story setup. The bits with Clyde were terrifically pulp noir and I liked that there wasn't much of a fight between the two. This is probably one of my site favorites currently and the best one you've done thus far. I really am excited to see more of this from you.Excellent work.