Oculama

I enjoy the continued use of cartoony slapstick gags. The silly poses and expressions are very fun! Ghost in the Reeds shooting out grenades from her neck is a really creative scar, and kind of an upgrade, if you think about it. Still, I would have liked to see a bit more polish in the art, which I know is tough with the dealine, but adding maybe a bit more variation in line thickness or a bit of shading/texture would help make things pop.

I really love the colors used here, especially in the first page. I also love the faces and shapes of the two birds, especially Ghost in the Reeds shrunk into an orb. Krookis talking through mimicry is also a fun way to add "dialogue" while still keeping both of them feel like birds, though Krookis seems more like a haunting entity than a bird. I think the execution of pages 3, 4, and 5 feels very fun and creative, though I must admit, Krookis tying up into a knot felt a bit non sequitur to me.

Long bird is long, lol
As is this comic! Was I just not noticing you were using the longscroll comics, or did you begin with this round? I think its a nice added bit of tongue in cheek with the accordion stretch nature of these birds hijinks.
Also suddenly, grenades XD As silly as this is, you kind of explain it with the militaryesque jeep and blasted terrain, but even if you didn't, you've really honed in on the Warner Bros senseless violence during this tourney, which has been fun. I think we all understand the tick tock of a deadline for these tournies, but I feel your quality has frayed further for this comic, which is a shame because I've seen your work when you give it TLC. Still, all in all, an amusing showing for the semifinal round

Wow, colors? Panel design filagree? You hooked me from the first page. Super dig that golden hour sunset palette you decided on. Also I may be putting on my tinfoil hat a bit too hard, but a sunset on the semifinal round feels very on the nose.
I dig this moment to moment paneling. It almost gives a flipbook animated quality to the events that play out as you flip page to page. I think its cute Krookis dialogue was little more than the movie slop they are binging (some iconic quotes too!).
I certainly wish there was more interaction with these two, but if my outside birdfeeder is any indication,a bird in bird wars running off another bird is admittedly on brand lol

I absolutely love these comics you're doing. They're short and a lot of fun. The slapstick action is just perfect and you're very much in your element here. That being said the initial backgrounds are extremely rough. I appreciate the difficulty of trying to do the tall grass, but the panels look incomplete so far. I've definitely seen you do better before, but I think the pure comedy slapstick of this is a great place for you. It's always a pleasure seeing your comics and I can't wait to see what you do next. Good work!.

Gorgeous looking comic. Your colors and inks are so on point and look so lovely. Krookis is so terrifically characterized and appears very neat. I'm not totally sure what the scar was. While the pages were stylized to lead us to the ending, it also wasn't very clear what was happening beyond being chased. That being said, this was so good. I absolutely can not wait to see you do more comics on here, Bird Wars or not. Great work!

This is a little tough of a review, for the sake of this I view this as two different comics. In my opinion the second comic is the much much stronger one of the two. The second has a more interesting scar and plays with the characters a bit more, it's still very spy vs spy which I love. You also go with more humour in the second one, I think it's all a better comic overall. This isn't to say that the first one isn't good, it is still very good but the second one is peak.

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Art is very nice on this one. Your first and second page are very well done very well coloured. You got a nice palette there. You do also draw Ghost in a very funny way, the eyes are hilarious and very simple. I do think what hurts the comic here is the story. I think you needed to show us more of what was happening in the back for Krooksis to end up in a knot like that. It does end up being a introduction and leave very fast, maybe if we saw more of a chase inside the barn to see krooksis get tangled before the escape sequence. Very good comic don't know how this is going to play out.

As always I like the format of your comics! The "choose your own adventure" thing is very inventive, as is letting your opponent choose their scar.
The story was some good ol' fashioned cartoony shenanigans, which I enjoyed greatly. I think my main issue is with the perspective of some of your panels? Like when Ghost went over the fence, it was hard to tell what was happening at first glance. Plus the horizon line is a bit too up on some of the panels, but I believe you'll get it eventually.

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I enjoy how your comics treat the characters like actual birds; and your palettes and page compositions for this round are especially stunning; love those warm tones and breakout panels. Ghost and Krookis are pretty goofy too, I feel like that's part of the appeal in this comic (their expressions and funny bird poses).

I think my only issue is that there's not muchhh to the story? it's entertaining enough, but there's not a lot of "meat" for me to bite into and analyze.