The girls are...wait...no, it couldn't be, could it???
(I'm glad we both agree the rose garden columns were the optimal place for BL to string someone up in a web).
This comic gets a lot across in just one page - that both characters are in the situation at all is pretty funny since I took it to mean they somehow decided mid-fight to try some light bondage and biting play in the middle of a fighting tournament, which is pretty funny, and feels fitting to both. I got a kick out of SK's completely unflapped face throughout - it takes a butch of steel to be so unbothered by a humanoid monster tying you up and biting you with fangs the size of your fingers~
I like also that both characters are entirely on the same page throughout (assuming SK was in fact about to ask to be bitten) when the intimacy isn't working out, I guess some folks would just rather duke it out~~
Great job illustrating BL - tbh I think you got her heir even better than I did. I love her gleeful spider eyes in the last panel so much. Favorite panel though is the bite - the silhouetting of SK with the one eye blazing is really striking, and the intensity of that panel bolsters the comedic payoff of SK's blaise reaction. that immediately follows.
Also art-wise, I like how you juxtapose the webs and bondage scene with the roses - it's very shoujo, and whether that was what you were gunnign for or not, I really enjoy the effect.
Great stuff overall - Sigil was SUPER fun to write for, and I had a blast with round one :3
Prometheus
HOOOMIIIIEEESSSSSS DISSINN MY GIIIRrrllLLL, WHY DO THEY uuuehuhjhjjssj
Comment posted: October 3rd, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Prometheus
HOOOMIIIIEEESSSSSS DISSINN MY GIIIRrrllLLL, WHY DO THEY uuuehuhjhjjssj
Comment posted: October 3rd, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Wolkemesser
The girls are...wait...no, it couldn't be, could it???
(I'm glad we both agree the rose garden columns were the optimal place for BL to string someone up in a web).
This comic gets a lot across in just one page - that both characters are in the situation at all is pretty funny since I took it to mean they somehow decided mid-fight to try some light bondage and biting play in the middle of a fighting tournament, which is pretty funny, and feels fitting to both. I got a kick out of SK's completely unflapped face throughout - it takes a butch of steel to be so unbothered by a humanoid monster tying you up and biting you with fangs the size of your fingers~
I like also that both characters are entirely on the same page throughout (assuming SK was in fact about to ask to be bitten) when the intimacy isn't working out, I guess some folks would just rather duke it out~~
Great job illustrating BL - tbh I think you got her heir even better than I did. I love her gleeful spider eyes in the last panel so much. Favorite panel though is the bite - the silhouetting of SK with the one eye blazing is really striking, and the intensity of that panel bolsters the comedic payoff of SK's blaise reaction. that immediately follows.
Also art-wise, I like how you juxtapose the webs and bondage scene with the roses - it's very shoujo, and whether that was what you were gunnign for or not, I really enjoy the effect.
Great stuff overall - Sigil was SUPER fun to write for, and I had a blast with round one :3
Comment posted: October 1st, 2024 at 7:38 PM