Oculama

a good comic with a surprising amout of other characters in it i did not expect any one else to be in this besides our main three but they are humorous, almost makes me forget the lil egg is even here! for better or for worse heh heh

I do like how willing you are to play with the angles in the comic and after hearing about the pretty intense pressure u were under due to outside circumstances, i am happy that we get to see a send off for the egg after all!! Keep it up wolke!! Youre only getting stronger !!!

SEND OFFFFSSS there is nothing better than a comic that can really pull out all the stops and finish off a FUCKING OCT and this one ROCKS IT IM SO PROUD OF THIS RUN LETS GOOO FURTLITZ MY FUCKING GOAT!!

PANELS. PACING. AND COLOR?!?!! AAAAAA I CANT STOP CHEEZIN'. If there is one thing you nailed thru your run in Road Trip its jsut showing a comic that really just nails the feeling of "A Day In The Life Of--" Like the fact that you can have multiple days portrayed in the comics themselves and keep us along for the ride, all in under 10 pages? Pure. Magnificence.

This finale is such a beautiful way to end the Beach Bod series. It raises the stakes in a way that perfectly fits the previous comics, and then brings things back down in such a quiet, dim way. There's a feeling of nostalgia and satisfaction, even as everything collapses into a dark lonely sky. Funny and frantic, the front half is so creative and quick paced, but man. Just sitting outside a broken bus as the sun sets, waiting for something to happen? It's perfect. The formatting brings out so much detail, from environmental storytelling but also just in the way every character moves and expresses themselves. Goodness.

This comic is really good at bringing in elaborate character motivations for multiple people, sweeping multiple scenes together into one big thing. While it feels like the characters take a back seat a bit to the plot, that plot is so satisfying and creative it still works super well. The new god designs are great at mirroring their original characters, and the back and forth of the bus driver is perfectly creepy and goofy. The ending using that bus as one final wrap up is a great way to keep everything in scope, and the Infinity Chasm note is a cute little bit to hang the hat on. Love it!

The comic does a perfect use of in media res, starting right after the climax of the disaster as the last members of the bus flee amidst an already-disaster. The artstyle is creative and haunting, giving it sort of a dreamy -- or nightmarish in this case -- appearance. The action is incredibly tense and well-detailed, and even long after the park is escaped you maintain a sense of hanging dread and anxiety, even in the midst of character interactions and the injections of some mild comedy. The ending is also a bit upsetting, but honestly in a good way, the way it just fizzles apart as everyone goes their separate way, as Beach Body tries to reflect on the fun she's had until then. A good way to end an entire tournament about what was supposed to be a fun road trip yet seems to lose everyone along the way. Honestly fantastic work on the comic!

A perfectly-paced comic! I like how you tied into the setup placed from the last round, showing the latent gods within the other two passengers, in a way that tied into their personalities. The comic had a perfect blend of comedy, tension, and action. The gods presented also made me laugh; I expected Jax's goddess to be the more useless of the two given she's just sitting on her phone, but ends up spurring Jax into action while Beach's god just vibes as a lil' snowman. The combat was really fun too, with everyone getting to contribute in their own way. I also love the casual setup to the next Oculama OCT! Great job and a satisfying way to end the tournament!

Your theming throughout your rounds have been such a treat. The photo motifs punctuating not only the locales but the people Beach bod encounters has been such fun to follow. I especially love how this one just begins right in the thick of the action at Funbo land and follows them throughout which ultimately ends on a bittersweet note when our trio finally diverge. Also I think you're the only artists who chronicled multiple days which makes so much sense and inform the distance/time traveled on said roadtrip.
:< Every road trips gotta end somehow and this one came to such a somber end well before the sun went down. I don't think I've read a comic that relays the feeling of a journey wrapping up in the way this did- very nice job.

Grubland, delicious xD That carnicval prize stuffy was adorable AND handy to relay messages!
I liked The set up and opposition that played a part where the trio had to band together, but like your last round, I feel there were too many new elements and characters introduced that needed time to be established for me to be invested. What I am invested is in Temptation, Beach Bod and Jax. like is Jax catching feelings for Beach? What're Temptations ultimate goals? why are they invested in their fellow roadtrip buddies? There were s many questions as to the unifying dynamic of this trio that weren't answered and I wish they were.
Still, 10+ pages is noting to sneeze at and you definitely show you gave it your all. I commend the effort!

This was fantastic, Your story was super interesting and was an immediate draw. It brought me inside instantly. Obviously a zombie outbreak sort of horror, but the idea of these three wandering around on the bus made me think of Stephen King's The Stand. A big part of me wishes that this wasn't the end of the tournament, because this would have been a really stellar set up for a tournament entirely. I don't know if you intend to do more with Beach Body with this story, but I would love to see more of this story. Furthermore, the art was great. You did a really solid job with this comic and you should be proud of yourself for it. Great work.

This was a good comic! I like that you wrapped everything with a little bow by having the bus driver have more of a role than initially presented. I think you really used Temptation's storyline in an way that interestingly adapted it for the other characters in the story to latch on to. Your art looked quite nice as well with some very solid character drawings and expressions. I wish we had more solid blacks utilized. While the splashes of colors were very welcome, I think stronger shadows would have helped a lot there as well. On the whole however, this was a great comic and a solid conclusion. Good work!

FURLITZ! I keep saying it but your style of drawing is just so unique and ingenious! i love how the shading and colors you use make your art look watercolor and paintbrush strokes at the same time! ugh. Also the cool brush used for the radio voice and the murder-matronics was a great touch! On to the story I loved the start up and being mid escape was very cool and no points off the whole but I would have liked to see some of the lead up to it cause it sounded bonkers! I wholeheartedly fell in love with beach body this tournament and I love her personality and how she just wants to keep the adventure going and it works really well with how the trip kinda has an abrupt and sudden end even if we would love for the trip to go just a bit longer and gives such a great ending with her just sitting there looking at the night sky but happy for the memories T_T. I really hope we see more of her someday cause she works so well for this tourney I wanna see more of her! lastly I think you did really good with the remaining cast of players in this comic and they all worked naturally with how they parted ways at the end of the trip and was very satisfying!

wolke! you be rockin it with your comics as always! firstly I would like to say bravo on the hand drawn commitment for this finale! You did a great job picking up right where you left off and kept with the tension and slid in the rest of the cast well to the plot and I absolutely loved the gods for Jax and beach body! temptation is always a treat and its nice to see em take central role for this last sprint of the tourney pluses that it was for a nice team up as well! I also like that you got the story to continue into the next tourney that's been setup as well. oh! and I love the action/ comedy throughout this comic which is always on point when you write so no exception here :)